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What are your plans for the future
In this text I will talk about my future job. I would like to become a pharmacist. A pharmacist is works in a drugstore to sell different drugs to the people who are sick, to help them choose the best drug to cure their diseases.
For my future life, I don't know but I think it will be a cool job, without any problems and don't take over the time, live in freedom. I would sloppiness the life, (I can't understand this sentence)I see that happening in ten years! ;)

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Much too short, somewhat confused & there are too many mistakes!

Your mark is 6/20

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This text talk about my future job. I would become pharmacist. If becoming pharmacist is for work in a durgstore to sell different drug to the people who are sick, to help them what's the best drug for taking care over them diseas.
For my future life, i don't no but i thinck it will be cool, whitout any problem and don't take over the time, live in freedom. I would sloppiness the life, i see that in ten years! ;)

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This text was written on 9 March, 1996 and it is about a woman who juggles between her job and her family. The text was published in The Gardian, an English newspaper. In the article, the journalist was surprised by the high number of people who don't take advantage of going to work in another country. To solve this problem the European comission has created a scheme: "Eures" (European Employment services) which is a trans-national employment agency. This agency concerns all European workers. The aim of this service is to help workers by putting them in contact with employers from another EC member state and giving them the opportunity of living and working in another EC country. Eures can't solve the European unemployment problem all by itself but if you want a job try it!

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Tis text is wrote on the 9 marth 1996 and he talk about a woman who jungle between her job and she's family. The text was published by The Gardian, an english newspaper. In the article, the journalist was surprised by the hight number of people who don't take profite of their advantage for their work and go out in other countries. For resolve this problem the European comission create a scheme: "Eures" (European Employment services) who is a transnational employment. This agency concern all of European workers. The aim of this service his helping workers and employers to get a job in their own countries and integrated in their own countrie. Eures can't resolve European enemployment problem it self. But if you want a job try it!