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What do you want to do in the future?

My plan for the future is still not very well defined. After all, it is difficult to choose exactly the job which we wish to do later. After my A-levels, if I get good marks, I would like to go to a Third-level college specializing in scientific studies related to the food industry, either to specializein lab analyses and of controls, or in agronomy. Many subjects interest me. I like being in contact with nature & animals but I also like scientific research. I would like to mix work on the ground and work in a laboratory but it is not easy to find both at once.

After the technical college, I would like to go to an engineering school. The versatility of an engineer is interesting in the sense that he can adapt himself to many situations and he knows many things in several fields. It is him who manages the team and he has to take on numerous responsibilities. It is an interesting and enriching job which I would really like to do. But the studies to get to that stage are difficult and there are not many places, I know that I am going to have to be patient & brave to succeed.

To work in another country than France would not disturb me. On the contrary, it would allow me to improve my English or my Spanish.
On the other hand, I would not like to do a Second-Year Post-A-level diploma. It is too vocational for me, I prefer doing long studies and not making up my mind straightaway about what I want to do

Comment :

Good, very interesting, but quite a few mistakes !

Your mark is 14/20

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My project of future is not still very well defines. After all, it is difficult to choose exactly the job which we wish to make later. After the baccalaureat, if I made a success in the credit note, me would like to make Third-level college specializing in scientific studies specialized either in the industries food, or in analyses and of controls in laboratory, or in the agronomy. Many subjects attract me. I like the contact with the nature, the animals but I also like the scientific research. I would like I could mix the work of ground and the work in laboratory but it is not easy to find both at once.
Later the technical college, I would like to go into an engineering school. The versatility of an engineer is interesting in the sense where he can adapt himself to many situations and he knows many thing in several domains. It is him who manages her team and he has to take numerous responsibilities. It is an interesting and enriching job which I would like I could really make. But the studies to arrive are there difficult and there is no place, I know that it is going to need that I hang on to make a success.
To work in another country than France would not disturb me. On the contrary, it would allow me to improve my English or my Spanish.
On the other hand, I would not like to go to Second-Year Post-A-level diploma. It is a too professional diploma for me, I prefer the long studies and not make a commitment at once in the world of the work.

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S : I find it really odd as a concept. Hiring a friend for a day, what a strange idea !
A : I see that you don't have the same vision as me. Hiring a friend for a day is a special experience. You can get him to accept a lot more than if he were a true friend.
S : Yes, but without that reason, I do not see what it can bring. Certainly not a friendship that lasts a long time. Yet do you just live with Andy lasted one day (I can't understand the last part of this sentence) .
A : That's right but you have to experience it in order to understand what it feels like one day. One has the impression of being someone else ! You should try it !

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S : I find it really odd as the concept. Buy a friend for a day, what a strange idea !
A : I see that you don't have the same vision as me. Buy a friend for a day is a special experience. You can get him to accept a lot more than if were a true friend.
S : Yes, but without this reason, I do not see what it can bring. A friendship that lasts a long time. Yet do you just live with Andy lasted one day.
A : That's right but you have to experience it in order to understand what it feels to one day. One has the impression of being someone else ! You should try it !