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What are your plans for the future
Later I want to join the army, to be a soldier or work in the heavy infantry. I've always liked team spirit, discipline, helping people, & serving my country and particularly being myself. After doing my day's military service (called the JAPD in France), the sergeant suggested I join the Army because I had all the required qualities to become a good soldier in his regiment. At the time I was under 16 years old so they could not hire me because I had no diploma and had to IBC (I don't know what this stands for). This year I am currently doing A-levels in science which I do not like much but I'm working on it and doing the best I can in order to fulfil my dream and hopefully I'll be in the army in November (2012)


Okay, interesting, but quite a lot of mistakes !

Your mark is 9/20