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After passing my A-levels specializing in lab sciences (or, if you like in French, the Baccalaureate specializing in laboratory science and technology), I would like to do a two-year degree at a technical 3rd-level college specializing in Biology Engineering. Because I like Human and molecular science.
I decided to study in Angers because it's a good student city. This diploma takes two years. It's quite difficult. So I will have to work hard at school to succeed. I hope to obtain this diploma.
Then I would like to continue on & do a professional degree. This is to have a degree level (to be paid more) and a double specialty.

And if I get good results, I could even further my studies and do an MD.
If I want to do long studies it's to have a non-repetitive job and therefore avoid carrying out the same tests all day long.
But at first I want to be sure to have a diploma. That's why I will begin with a two year degree at a technical 3rd-level college
Once I graduate & if I succeed in doing long studies, I would like to do research on new renewable energy.
If not, I will probably work in the recycling of pollutants & waste, water treatment, or other activities that preserve nature.

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Good, very interesting, even if there are a lot of mistakes !

Your mark is 13/20

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After the Baccalaureat Science and Technology of Laboratory, I would like to make a Degree University of Technology in Biology Engineering. Because I like Human and molecular science.
I studied at Angers because it's a good city student. This diploma takes two years. It's quite difficult. So I will have to work hard at school to succeed. I hope to have this degree.
Then I would specialize thanks to a professional license. This is to have a degree level (to be paid more) and a double specialty.

And if I get good results, I could get into long studies, as a master.
If I want to make long study it's to have a non-repetitive work. As do the same analysis all day.
But at first I want to be sure to have a diploma. That's why I begin with a Degree University of Technology.

Once I graduate, if I succeeded in make long study, I would do research on new renewable energy.
If not, I working in the recycling of pollutants waste, water treatment, or other activities preserving nature.

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Cheryl Jones is a woman. She is 37 years old. She has a biology degree from Massachusetts Institute of Technology. *She has got a husband, Bobby . He had ! a contracting business. Before the recession, they had three children. They live reasonably well . But five years ago, they lost their jobs . When Cheryl found work again , she had no choice but to go back full time to feed her children . *She has to juggle between a full-time career and motherhood.

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Cheryl Jones is a women. She is 37 years old. She has a biologie degree from Massachusetts Institue Technologie. She could juggle a full-time career abd motherhood. She has got husband, Bolly. He work in contracting business. They are three childreen. Then life iy's Ok. But five years ago, they lost their job. when she found work, she had no choice but to go back full time for feed his childreen.