Melanie B's texts
veterinaires008.gif

Corrected text

Text 2 - My plans for the future

Later, I would like to study in a science-related field, especially if it's learning about animal anatomy and studying their behaviour according to their environment. I find it very interesting. I like taking care of animals, helping them feel better, that's why I'd like to become a vet. I would like to treat them, take care of their wounds, reassure their masters, and study the differences in behaviour between different breeds of animal … I would feel useful. Then, after my third year of school, I would like to specialize in wild animals. I would like to work in a zoo because the animals are not common, they are more interesting to study and it changes habits (I can' understand the last part of this sentence). Animals in captivity need more attention and sometimes more care because they are constantly under stress, & suffer from climate change. In addition I can study the character of certain kinds of animal based on the other animals around them. And why not, maybe work in a foreign reserve.

Comment

Good, & very interesting

Your mark is 14/20

Original text

Text 2 - My plans for the future

Later, I would like to study in relation to science. Learn animal anatomy and study their behaviour according to their environment. I find it very interesting. I like taking care of animals, help them feel better, that's why I'd like to become a vet. I would like to treat them, take care of their wounds, reassure their masters, and study the differences in behaviour between different kinds … I would feel useful. After my third year of school then I would like to specialize in wild animals. I would like to work in a zoo because the animals are not common, they are more interesting to study and it changes habits. Animals in captivity need more listening and sometimes more care because they are constantly under stress, climate change. In addition I can study the character of certain kinds based on the other is there. And why not, maybe a foreign reserve.

Corrected text

Texte pour l'oral

Later, I would like to study in a science-related field, especially if it's learning about animal anatomy and studying their behaviour according to their environment. I find it very interesting. I like taking care of animals, that's why I'd like to become a vet. Then, after my third year of school, I would like to specialize in wild animals. I would like to work in a zoo because the animals are not common, they are more interesting to study . Animals in captivity need more attention and sometimes more care because they are constantly under stress, & suffer from climate change. In addition I can study the character of certain kinds of animal based on the other animals around them. And why not, maybe work in a foreign reserve.

Text 1

On your Eurobike
This text describes a scheme called Eures which is a trans-national employement agency convering all the contries of the EU. This project was created in november 1994. It consists of helping employers and workers set up an integrated labour market. The problem is that, few people take advantage of their right to work and settle in other countries because unemployment figures in the EU are high. Eures give job seekers details of job vancancies in European countries together with information about living and working accomodation. This scheme is financed by the European commission in partnership with national public employement services. Language skills are very important especially with a business degree and marketing or finance. The situation is hard for UK applicants since only half of them speak fluently another European language. Many do not realise that to work in Amsterdam or Copenhagen some Dutch or Danish is needed even if English is widely understood. This project is important because it can encourage Europeans to break out of their national boundaries.

Original text

Text 1

On your Eurobike
This text describe a scheme called Eures wich is a transnational employement angency convering all the contries of the EU. This project was created in november 1994. He consist to help employers and workers set up an integrated labour market. The problem is that, few people take advantage of their right to work and settle in other countries because unemployement figures in the EU are high. Eures give job seekers details of job vancancies in European countries together with information about living and working accomadation. This scheme is financed by the European commission in partnership with national public employement services. Language skills are very important especially with a business degree and marketing or finance. For the UK applicants since only half of them speak commonly an another European language. Many do not realise that to work in Amsterdam or Copenhagen some Dutch or Danish is needed even if english is widely unterstood. This project is important because it can encourage European to break out of their national boundaries.