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My plans for the future
Currently I am doing my A-levels specializing in laboratory sciences. In the future I would like to work for the French Scientific Police. In order to get there, I am hoping to do a Second-Year post-A-level degree in Bio-Analysis and Controls, or do a Second-Year post-A-level degree in chemistry, and, if I a able, a professional degree. Like I said, I would like to work later for the Police and more precisely on the ground. What attracts me in this job is to investigate, interrogate suspects, uncover the truth and put the "bad guys" in jail. That's why I watch a lot of TV series like NCIS, CSI Manhattan / Miami.

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ok, but too short & too many mistakes !

Your mark is 8/20

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Texte pour projet future.

Currently I am in STL Terminal Option BGB. For my future I would like to point me to the support of the Scientific Police. I look for that in my Bac STL BTS is a Bio-Analysis and Control, or BTS is a chemist, according to my ability, and a professional license. I would later work in the Police and more precisely on the ground. Is that attracts me in this business is to investigate, interrogate suspects, uncover the truth and put the "bad guys" in jail.That's why I look a lot like all the TV series NCIS, CSI Manhattan / Miami.

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Text 1 Friendship

A true friend is a person we like and whom we have known for a long time. He/she understands us without speaking and he/she conforts us in bad times. He/she is always there to have a good time and shares the most intimate secrets with you. Friendship cannot be bought, it is built up and intensifies over the years. A friend gives you advice and his/her opinion, even when he/she doesn't agree, and he/she can prevents you from doing stupidities that you might regret. Friendship is a rare thing that one must never betray. It's a well-known fact that true friends cab be counted on the fingers of your hand. Friendship is first to know before receiving (I don't understand the meaning of this sentence, sorry . I am fortunate to have a real friend, whom I adore, and would do anything to keep her for a long time.

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Text 1 Friendship

A true friend is a person we like and who we know for a long time. He us understands without speeking and he conforts us in the bad moments. He is always here to have a good time and shares the most intimate secrets. Friendship cannot be brought, it builts and intensifies over the years. A friend gives you advice and his/her opinion, even when he/she doesn't agree, it prevents when doing stupidities. That you might regret. Friendship is a rare thing that one must never betray. It's said that true friends, they are counted on the fingers of one hand. Friendship is first to know before receiving. I am fortunate to have a real friend, whom I adore, and would do anything to keep for a long time.