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After my last year in high school, I hope to study in the field of human biology. I'd like to do a second-year post-A-level diploma in medical analysis because I love this area and this would allow me to expand my knowledge on the human body and its many constituents. After my second-year post-A-level diploma I hope to work in a laboratory where I could explore and find a treatment for some blood diseases. I hope to achieve this project which I like a lot because I have always hoped to do this ever since my childhood. That's how I see my future.

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After my last year in high school, I would hope turn toward the field of human biology. second-year post-A-level diploma in the medical analysis because I love this area and this would allow me to expand my knowledge on the human body and its many constituents. I hope after my second-year post-A-level diploma i hope turn towards the laboratory where I could explore and resolve some blood diseases. This view, I like a lot, I hope to achieve because I want this for my childhood. that's how I see my future.

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A true friend to me is someone who can be counted on. He/she never lets us down when a problem occurs, and even if it is two o'clock in the morning he/she will be there to listen. Most of the time, friends can be counted on the fingers of your hand. But once found you must not let them down because they are friends of gold and such a friendship is invaluable. Mostly this kind of friendship is a friendship that dates back to childhood and it lasts for a very long time, so have with the time we can talk about best friend (I can't understand this part of the sentence) , because you know this person very well. We can really trust that person.

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A true friend to me is someone who can be counted. He never let us fall into the first problem occurred, and even if it is two o'clock in the morning he will be there to listen. Most of the time, there friends that can be counted on the fingers of hand. But once found you must not drop them because they are friends in gold and such a friendship is invaluable. mostly this kind of friendship is friendship a childhood and she lasts for very long years, so have with the time we can talk about best friend, because you know this person very well. We have all our confidence in it.