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What are your plans for the future

In the future, I would like to go to a IUT (which is a technical college in France) to studey biology because I like this subject.
After, if I have goods marks, I want to study in an engineering school to be a lab engineer in the food processing industry or agronomy. My dream is to work in the biology field because, for me, it's a passion.
I like studying nature, humans, animals…
If I can go on to a higher-education institution I would like to do a degree in biology and a masters degree in the same speciality.
After my studies, I would like to work in Spain because it's my favorite country and I love this language.
And for me having an international experience is very important.
After two or three years in Spain I will come back to France to work in a laboratory.

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Text 2

What are your plans for the future

In the futur, I would like to go in IUT (technical college) in a departement of biologie because i like this subject.
After, if I have goods marks, I want studing a engineer school to be a engineer in food processing industry or agronomy. My dream is working in a biology for me it's a passion.
I like discover nature, humain, animal…
If I can go in higher-education institution I would like to do a license of biology and a master in the same speciality.
after my studies I would like to work in spain because it's my favorite country and i love this languages.
And for me have a international experience is very important.
After two or three years in spain I will come back in France to work in a laboratory.

Corrected text :

Text 1

The text was written on 22 May, 1995 and was published in Newsweek.
It is about the place of women in the workplace and other workplace reserved there was fifty years te men yet. The last part of this sentence has no meaning

The text says that a woman's working day does not end when she returns home from work because after there is still the houswork to be done, children to be looked after, meals to be made…. Most women often work because their husbands were laid off, so they become the breadwinner of the family.

Women hold fast to them children because if them children The last part of this sentence has no meaning eat it's because they work. The text says that women often earn more than their husbands

But the problem facing women who work is ungratefulness… often they have an income which is not as good as a man's who has the same job. In the text we have an example of this with Cheryl's life. She has a job, a husband, and five children… a beautiful life. But one day bobby's business went bust. Since this day it's Cheryl who earns all the money needed to support the family.

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Text 1

The text was writing in may of nineteen ninety five and was publishing in the Newsweek.
He talk about space of womens in the workspace and other workplace reserved there was fifty years te men yet.

The text says a work is just a few pary of the day to womens, after there are houswork, children, meal…. Most if womens work it's ofen because her husband were laid off, so they are the breadwinner of them family.

Womens hold fast to them children because if them children eat it's because they work. the text says often womens ear more than them husbands

But the problem of their womens who work is the gratful… often have an income not as good as men who have a same job. in the text we have an exemplewith Cheryl life. She has a job, a husband, and five children… a beautiful life. But a day bobby's business went ful. Since this day it's Cheryl who ear money for support one's family.