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After my A-levels I want to go to college to study psychology in Angers. I find this very interesting because most people think that a psychologist just helps people who have problems speaking by listening to them while lying on a sofa, but in fact there are several areas in this profession. I want to do a degree where I can specialize in clinical psychology. This degree will allow me to help children and teenagers with disabilities to allow them to have a normal life and help them to socialize more. This job means a lot to me because I myself have somebody in my family who is handicapped and I find that there is not enough being done to help people in this situation and many people are even afraid of disability. My job would be to help them develop their language skills by teaching them to read and write which will help them to find a job and be independent. If I don't succeed, then I'll become a nurse because it is a job that interests me but this area is more medical. I want to perform work that can help people to feel useful.

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Good, really interesting !

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After my degree I want to go to college to study psychology to Angers. I find this very interesting because most people think is just a psychologist has helped people who have problems speaking and listening on the sofa, but in fact there are several areas that can have known. I want to go up a license for me that specializes in the psychology clinic. This degree will allow me to help children and teenagers with disabilities to allow them to have a normal life a little more and help them to socialize. This job a lot to me because I myself in my family a handicapped person and I find that there are not enough to help a person go to the people even though many people are afraid of the disability. This work can help their development languages ​​to teach them to read and write this for later to have a job and be independent. If I ever fails I would contest a nurse because it is a job that interests me but this area is more medical. I want to perform work that can help people to feel useful.

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Eurobike is an article which deals with unemployment.
The journalist at the beginning of the article is surprised because people don't take advantage of their right to work or settle in other countries because unemployment figures in countries like the UK are high. A scheme called EURES, which was created in November 1944, is a trans-national employment agency covering all the countries of the European economic area. The aim of the scheme is to help workers and employers set up an integrated labour market. EURES give job seekers details of job vacancies in the various European countries together with information about living and working conditions. Thanks to this scheme, job vacancies have gone up from 600 to over 5000. Language skills are very important. EURES is financed by the European comission in partnership with national public employement services. This poses a problem for UK workers because only 1/2 of them are fluent in another European language. The scheme is important because it incites Europeans to break out of their national boundaries into the expanded opportunities of the next century.

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Eurobike is an article speak of unemployment.
The journalist at the beginning of the article is surprised because people don't take advantage of their right to work on settle in other countries because unemployment figures in the UK are hight. A scheme called EURES created in november 1944 which is a transnational employment agency covering all the countries of the European economic area. The aim of the scheme is to help workers and employers set up on integrated labour market. EURES give job seekers detail of job vacancies in the various European countries together with information about living and working conditions. It has gon up from 600 jobs vacancies to over 5000. Language skills are very important. EURES it is financed by the European comission in partnership with national public employement service. This pose a problem for the UK because only 1/2 of them are fluent in another European language. The scheme is important because when Europeans will break out of their national bandaries into the expanded opportunities of the next century.