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What are your plans for the future?

After my final year of high school, I would like to study science at a DUT (which is a Third-level college specializing in scientific studies) & specialize in Applied Biological Chemistry to become a dietitian. This job has always attracted me. I like the contact with people & helping them. Nutrition is for me an important thing in life. Too many people do not know how to eat healthy ! I might want to continue my studies by doing a professional degree which will qualify me in psychology. Many people are overweight or obese for psychological reasons, & this degree will allow me to understand better the underlying causes so that I can help such people overcome the problem. I would like to work in a hospital or in a private practice.
This am very set on doing this type of work

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Good, interesting, but too many mistakes !

Your mark is 11/20

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After my final year of high school, I will like integrating the DUT biological genius dietary option to become a dietitian. This job always has me to attract, I like the contact with people, to help the persons. The nutrition is for me an important thing in the life. Too many persons do not know how to have a good feeding ! I will want to continue by a professional license who will specialize me in the psychology. Many persons are on weight or obese man for a psychological reason, this license will allow me to know better these causes and to help persons in this domain. I will like working in a hospital or in liberal.
This project holds me very heart.

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On your Eurobike

This text is about Eures which is a trans-national employment agency using a computer network covering all the countries of the European Economic Area. This plan was started in November 1994. It was conceived to help workers and employers by creating an integrated labor market. Eures provides job-seekers with specific details of vacant positions in every member state.
It's financed by the European Commission in partnership with national employment services. It began modestly with a data bank of around 600 posts. The figure exceeds now 5000. Many do not realise that to work in an office in Amsterdam or Copenhagen some Dutch or Danish is necessary even if English is widely understood. Clearly, Eures cannot solve Europe's huge unemployment problem by itself but it can help.

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In your opinion, what is a real friend (120 words)

For me, friendship is a part of magic. A real friend is someone who understands you at a glance, somebody with whom we have real complicity; someone on whom we can count, whether it is in good times or bad times. A real friend is someone from whom we can not be separated. Neither distance nor events can change a real friendship. A real friend does not judge you but knows what to say when you make mistakes . A real friend, it is a shoulder on which to rest, an attentive ear, protective arms. A real friend, helps us accept the difficult things in life. A real friend, knows our relatives. A real friend, is someone that we have known since childhood and who has always been there for us . Real friends are rare in life

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Good, really interesting, especially the second text

Your mark is 16/20

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On your eurobike

This text speaks about Eure it is a transnational employment agency treated by computer covering quite the countries of the European Economic Area. This plan was invented in November 1994. He was conceived to help workers and employers by creating an integrated labor market. Eure look to the job-seekers of the specific details of vacant position of every member state.
It's financed by the European Commission in partship with national employment services. He began modestly with a data bank around 600 posts has to provide. The figure exceeds now 5000. Many do not realise that to work in an office has Amsterdan or Copenhagen certain Dutch or Danish are necessary even if the english is widely understood. Clearly, Eures cannot solve Europe's huge unemployment problem by itself.

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In your opinion, what is a real friend (120 words)

For me, the friendship it is a part of magic. A real friend is someone who understands you at a glance, somebody with whom we have the real complicity, On whom we can counted whether it is in vouchers or bad moments.A real friend, is someone with whom we can be separated. Neither the distance nor the events can change the real friendship. A real friend does not judge you but knows how to call back you the order when you make errors. A real friend, it is a shoulder on which to rest(base), an attentive ear, protective arms.A real friend, helps us accepted the difficult things of the life. A real friend, knows our relatives. A real friend, is someone that we know since the childhood and that we have never lost of seen. The real friends are rare but for the life.