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What are your plans for the future?
I have already decided on my future plans. After passing my A-levels in lab sciences, I would like to do a dimploma in pharmacy (in France it's called a Professional Certificate in Pharmacy). For that, I would have to do a two-year training programme in a specialized center called a CFA (Training Center for apprentices). I chose this option because this training allows me to spend two days during the week at the center and the rest in a pharmacy where I get paid, which means that I will get on-the-job experience. Then the relationship is between the apprentice and his boss, which can be very beneficial to me as a trainee as I become familiar with the world of work. All that to say that it's not going to be easy as you really have to be motivated and have a lot of courage and give the best of yourself.
I have thought about doing this job for 4 years and I really want to attain my goal. So that's how I see my future job in pharmacy.

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Ok, interesting, but too many mistakes !

Your mark is 11/20

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My future plans are put in my head. After having my BAC STL, I would like to make a BP (Professional Certificate)Pharmacy is a two-year training and learning that fact to the CFA (Training Center apprentices). Why I chose this option because I like the first system that offers this training is to say that it is to have two days during the week and the rest in business the payment, which is directly enter the world of work. Then the relationship is between theapprentice and his boss, it can make large connaissanses and also with the outside world. All her to say that this does going to be easy you really have to be motivated and have a lot of courage in themselves and give the best ofourselves, the more I consider this tart because I really like her and I thought about is choice for 4 years but that's a lot I want to get to my goal. that's how I see my future work in a pharmacy

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This text is an article from the newpaper called the Guardian which was published on 9 march 1996.
First it deals with an organization which launched a scheme called Eures in November 1994. It mentions all the various activities of a computerised ,trans-national employment agency covering all the contries of the EU
Then it describes the development of a concept that puts employers in contact with workers who need help in the labour market ,and it shows all the important changes.
However , this text is based on a problem of the **F
rench language, more precisely it's a problem which concerns jobs applicants in the EU.
To conclude, all throughout this article the journalist sets out at explaining the new proposals concerning the exchanges and communication within the EU and also the problems facing the different contries within the EU, is why the revolt a lots of people (workers) wants it in place news meter system for this to work well is effective (I can't understand the last part of this sentence) .

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This text is an article from the newpaper called the Guardian which was published in 9 march 1996.
First it adresses the organization launched a scheme called Eures .November 1994 ,citing the various exchanges of witch involved a computerised ,trans-national employment agency covering all the contries of the AREA
Then it describes the development of a concept that explain the integration of employers and workers who need help with labour market ,like to the example that showing a evolution important .
However , this text is based on a problem of the french language more precisely that asks concerns for jobs applicants in the EU.
To conclude from all a long this article sets up a several ways that is to say setting up a new proposals the exchanges and communication and also problems of different contries comprising the EU,is why the revolt a lots of people (workers) wants it in place news meter system for this to work well is effective .