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What are your plans for the future

Later I want to work in a laboratory of forensic science, because I think it's very rewarding for any person, and being able to help others suffering from the loss of a loved one is interesting. What I really like in this job is to solve an investigation! In fact it gives a concrete goal to attain. Also, you can change in rank and importance within the police forces, and we must keep our knowledge up to date, as science evolves all the time. In this business, there is no time to get bored as each investigation, even though it may look like another, is different! If, however, I don't manage to do this job, then I'll work in a laboratory that is either tests blood, (I erased this part of the sentence as it had no meaning) or in a laboratory related to bacteria, since it is a subject that fascinates me and is constantly changing. However I would not like to work in a lab which tests bacteria in food, since I couldn't stand seeing every day food that has gone off, it would rather be the bacteria found in our bodies or in hospitals or those which are responsible for epidemics.

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Good, interesting, even if the work was done too late (you lost 2 points because of that!

Your mark is 10/20

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What are your plans for the future

Later I want to work in the laboratories of forensic science, because I think it's very rewarding for the person, and being able to help others suffering from the loss of a loved one is interesting. What I really like this job is to resolve an investigation! Infact it gives a concrete goal that we do. Also you can change in rank and importance within the police or gendarmerie, and we must keep challenging question our knowledge, as science evolves all the time. In this business, there is no a certain weariness as each survey even though it may look like another is different! If any time I could not return there, I work in laboratories that are either related to the blood, so in all tests "normal" that we can do every day for simple reasons, or either in the laboratory related to bacteria, since it is a subject that fascinates me and is changing. For I would not work against the bacteria in food, since nothing that to see food all day I hate, it is rather that the bacteria found in our bodies or in hospitals or those who are responsible for epidemics.