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What are your plans for the future?
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My plans for the future would be to get my A-levels (High school diploma) to study pharmacy & obtain a degree with the intention of becoming an assistant in pharmacy.
For that I am already on the look out for a boss and I would like to find one because I am very motivated by this project.
I like this job because there is a share of responsibility, even if there is less than that of a pharmacist , and because I'll be in contact with customers (even if I am shy).
This is a two-year diploma and I hope to obtain the diploma before entering the world of work and finding a job. When I say "the world of work", I mean having a boss and being paid because, for the moment, I am still in school.
That is my project for the future.

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My plans for the future, would be to get my Tub (Ferry,High school diploma) to study then by a BP ( professionnal certificate) of pharmacy with the intention of becoming an assistant in pharmacy.
For that, I am in full search for boss and I would like to find one because, I am very motivated for this project.
I like this job because there is a share of responsibility even if there is less that the pharmacist , the relation with the customers (even if I am shy).
This certificate is made in two years and I hope to have the diploma has the end for them gone into the "real" active life and to find a job; more have no studies. I speak of "real" active life because if I am a boss I would be paid but I am still in school.
Here is my project for the future.

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Text 1

Summary of the text :

In the text, the author notes that in the EU there are 10.9 per cent of unemployed among the working population.
In 1994, EURES, a trans-national program, was created. This scheme gives job seekers details of job vacancies in various European countries, together with information about living and working conditions, and accomodation.
This program is financed by the European Commission in partnership with the national public employment services.
Jean Marc Soulas is a Euro-adviser and explains that is not enough to have a degree but people must also speak another language and that the most spoken language is English. Not to speak a language is "an obstacle" for those looking for work.

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What is a real friend ?

For me, a real friend is someone that you trust, someone who knows our faults and we know his or hers but love them anyway.
With a real friend, we can talk about almost anything, and he/she does his/her best to help you .
We can cry without being judged , and, in times like that, he/she tries to reassure us and comfort us when necessary. It's someone who doesn't let us down ,even in the difficult times.
We can share everything with that person : the good and the bad moments.
We have to be sincere to each other
A real friend is always there for us and we are there for him/her
Friends cannot count it on the fingers of the hand but really, yes. (I don't know what this last sentence means, sorry!)

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Text 1

Summary of the text :

In the text, the autor notes that in the EU there are 10,9 per cent of unemployed among the working population.
In 1994, was created a transnational program ( Eures) , it gives job seekers detail of job vacancies in various European countries, together with information about living
and working conditions accomodation.
This program is financed by the European Commission in patnership with the national public employment service.
Jean Marc Soulas is a Euro-advised and explains that is not enough to have a degree but must also speak another language and that the most spoken is English. Speak a language is "an obstacle" for those looking for work.

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What is a realfrien, for me ?

For me, a real friend is someone who you trust. Who knows our faults we know his but loves us anyway.
With a real friend, we can talk about almost everything, and he did his best to help.
He can see us cry without judging us , on the contrary it tries ta reassure us and comfort us when necessary, and who abandons us not even in the difficult moments.
We can share everything with that person's good and bad moments.
We have to be sincere the one to the other one.
A real friend is for us there and we are for him there.
The friends cannot count it on the fingers of the hand but really, yes.