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My plans for the future
After my A-levels I want to do a second-year post-A-level degree in lab science, for example carrying out blood tests or maybe doing other things like that. But it's a project. I have another projects, for example to become a veterinarian to take care of animals or to become a nurse to care for people who are sick. I really find that job interesting. Or to become an osteopath it's very hard. At this stage I don't know what training to choose because it's very difficult to choose a training for a future job.

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Ok, interesting, but much too short !

Your mark is 10/20

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My projects for the future

After the bachelor i want make a second year post A level degree in the laboratory for example. For after make blood tests or may be make others thinks. But it's a project. I have another projectsfor example to become a veterinarian to take care animals or to become nurse to be careful to people who are sicks.It's a beautiful job for me. Or to become osthéopathe but it's very good. I don't know what training to choose it's very difficult to choose a trainingfor a future job.

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A real friend is honest with me. He/she should always tell me the truth. He/she is someone who helps me less that I tell him (I can't understand the last part of this sentence) . He's my confident and I can tell him everything I want. He/she knows how to keep my secrets. He/she understands me and consoles me. He/she offers me presents. We spend good times together. He/she knows a lot of things about me and he will never disclose my secrets. But for me he must have other qualities : patient, self-controlled, peaceful, loving… Finally he must be happy

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A real friend is honest with me. He says me the truth. He's someone who help me less that I tell him. He's my confident and I can say him all that I want. He knows keep my secrets. He understands me and console me. He offered me present. We spend good time together. He knows a lot of thinks on me and he will never say my secrets. But for me he want have another qualities : patience, self control, peace,love… Finally he must to be happy