Delphine F's texts
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Firstly I am doing A-levels in Lab Science because I like science. After high school I hope to go to an engineering college (called an IUT in France) because I've seen what it's like and I like it! I want to work in biology to become a food engineer in food quality control because for me what you eat is very important for your health and it's important to be able to trust producers. My job would consist in carrying out tests to avoid food poisoning. And in parallel I would like to study parasitology because I find it exciting. If my plans come true I would be proud and happy to do a job that I like!

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Ok, but a little too short & a lot of mistakes !

Your mark : 10/20

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First I made STL because I like science. After high school I go to the IUT because I've seen places and I like them! I want to work in biology to become a food engineer in quality control in food because to me that what you eat is healthy is very important for our health and for reassurance, that you can trust producers is really important and I control the fact that poison is not done. And in parallel I would like to study parasitology because I find it exciting. If my plans are realized I would be proud and happy to excercer a job that I like!

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"On your Eurobike" is an article which is about the changes in the workplace . At the beginning of the article , the journalist is surprised because people have now the right to work and settle in other countries. Things are changing because unemployment figures in the Uk are high. A scheme called EURES has been set up which is a trans-national employment agency covering all the countries of the European economic area. The aim of the scheme is to help workers and employers set up in integrated labour market. Eures gives job seekers details of job vacancies in the various European countries together with information about living and working conditions , accommodation etc… Since it was started, the number of job vacancies offered by EURES has gone up from 600 to over 5.000 . The scheme is financed by the European Commission in partnership with national public employment services . Language skills are important. That causes a problem for UK appllicants since only half of them are fluent in another European language.

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."On your eurobike" is an article wich treat about the change worker. At the begining of the articles , the journalist was surprised because there is a right to work and settle in other countries. This is changing because unemployment figures in the Uk are high. A shceme called EURES wich a transational employment agency covering all the countries of the European economic area. The aim of the scheme is to help workers and employers set up in integrated labour market. Eures gives job seekers details of job vacancies in the various European countries together with information about living and working conditions , accomodation etc… It has gone up from 600 jobs vacancies to over 5.000 . It is financed by the European Comission in partnership with national on public employment service. Language skills are important. That put a problem because for UR apllicants since only half of them are fluent in other european language.