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Text 2 My plans for the future

In my future adult life, I dream of working in the field of environmental protection, particularly in the water sector.
It would be good to work abroad and especially in Africa. To find new ways of improving drinking water in remote areas, by finding new ways to treat water or finding a way to make water (si tu y arrives, tiens-moi au courant !)
If I stay in France, I would like to work on water treatment, to avoid the wastage of water.
To work in this area I intend to do a Second-Year post-A-Level diploma in Water Resources Engineering, specializing in Biochemistry or Environmental Engineering. Following these two years I would like to do a degree in biology or Environmental Engineering .

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Text 2 My plans for the future

In my future adult life, I dream of environmental protection in the water sector.
It would be best to work abroad and in Africa. To find new ways to affected drinking water in remote areas, find new ways to treat water or to find a way to make water.
If I stay in France would be better now the treatment of water users, to avoid wastage of water.
To work in areas I intend to do after my BAC is a BTS business of water is an option DUT Biochemistry Environmental Engineering.Following these two years I would make a L3 in biology and environmental.

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Text 1 "On your bike"

This is an article taken from the Guardian and dated March 9, 1996
This article is about unemployement that affects all people in Europe, especially when these people work in a neighboring country.
To find a solution to the problem in the UK, a recruitment scheme was set up to help all unemployed persons seeking work.
The scheme is intended to reduce the employment rate in Europe and to enable Europeans to find work. It is financed by the European Commision in partnership with national public employment services.
The only problem that this kind of project may pose is that of the language barrier because you have to be 100% bilingual, and know the language of the country where you want to work.

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Text 1 "On your bike"

This is an article of the Guardian of March9;1996
This article talks about the unemployement that affect all people in Europe when these people to wok in the neighboring country.
Problem is to change the UK we decide to set up a recruitment take into account all unemployed persons sekking work.
The principal is intended to reduce the employment rate in Europe and to enable Europen to find work. It is financed by the European Commision in partnership with national public employment services.
The only problem may pose this kind of project is, the language barrier because you have 100% bilingual, the language of the pay or we will work.