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Dialogue de stage
E: Good morning. Please sit down.
Me : good morning !!!
E: How are you today?
Me: I am stressed out, but I am fine, thank you
E: Can you introduce yourself ?
Me: My name is Fassuhati and I'm eighteen years old.
E: Where are you studying ?
Me: I'm studying at Jean Moulin High School.
E: Tell me about yourself, your studies and your background ?
Me: I did a scientific baccalaureate, I chose this background to be laboratory technician, and I've been doing these studies now for the past two years. I have done two work placements in the laboratory processing industry; the first one was last year which lasted six weeks and the second one was earlier this year and it lasted eight weeks
I am very interested in microbiology, to learn how bacteria work and their consequences on the environment and on us as humans.
E: Where did you do your work placement ?
Me: I found my placement in another region of France in a pharmaceutical laboratory.
E: Did you find your work placement in your first year easily ?
Me: Yes, last year, early in May ,I still hadn't found anything. I didn't think about looking for one in another region because I didn't know anyone who could help me and I wanted to find my work alone.
In the end I was obliged to ask help from all the people I knew. So I sent a lot of letters before I was finally taken on.
E:what activities did you do during your first work placement ?
Me: During my first work placement, I worked on (gas? liquid?) chromatography to find out about its composition.
E: Was there a good atmosphere at work?
Me: The atmosphere was very good and my colleagues were very nice. They helped me so much when I had a problem carrying out tests.
E:What do you plan to do after you graduate ?
Me: After graduating, I will go to work in a pharmaceutical laboratory or in a hospital lab.
E: Do you think you are made for this job? Why ?
Me: I am really interested in this type of work because I am a meticulous person but during my training & studies I was faced with a few difficulties which made me have some doubts, but I got over them and I stuck in there. This job can help me progress in scientific research.
The original "uncorrected" text
Dialogue de stage
E: good morning.please sit down.
Me : good morning !!!
E:how are you today?
Me:I am stress, but I am fine, think you
E:can you introduce yourself ?
Me:my name is fassuhati and I'm eighteen year old. I ….
E:where are you studing ?
Me:I'm studying at Jean Moulin High School.
E:tell me about yourself,your studies and your background ?
Me:I do a scientific baccalaureate, I choosed this background to be laboratoiry technician, which during the two year, I have done two work placements in laboratory processing industry,the first one was last year during six weeks and the second one was earlier in this year during eight weeks
I am very interested in microbiology,to learn the functioning of bacterium and their consequences on the environment and on us as humans.
E:how did you find your work placement ?
Me:I found my placement in other departement in a pharmaceutical laboratory.
E:did you find your work placement in first year easily ?
Me:yes,the last year, early in may ,I hadn't a placement. I didn't look for in other departement because I din't know someone who could accommodate me and I wanted to make my work alone.
In the lastly I was oblige to ask a help to all people I knew. So I sent my letters anywhere where I knew a people and thus to call .
E:what activities did you do during your first work placements ?
Me:during my first work placement, I worked on the (chromatographies) of the (medical) for dertermined their composition,
E:was there a good atmosphere ?
Me:the atmosphere was very good my colleagues were very nice .they help me so much when I have a probleme on my (manipulation) ,
E:what do you plan to do after you graduate ?
Me:after graduating, I will go to work in a pharmaceutical laboratory.or in hospital lab,
E:do you think you are made for this job?why ?
Me:I am really interested in this type of work because I am a meticulous person.but during the background I met a difuculty whose have did doupted, but I did a progressing and I had continu until at ther. This job can help me progress in scientific research.